Worst trip EVER!!!

In Colorado, we have this thing called outdoor Ed. It's basically a week long trip away from home where you can have no communication with your parents whatsoever. Oh, it also costs about $200 to go there. Woo hoo. I went there anyway. I was SO exited to stay there with Gabby and Sammie, my two best friends, but I wasn't even in the same hiking group as them. I HATED being away from my parents, but once you're on that bus, you really have no choice. My roommates were horrible to me. They kept whispering to each other, but when I'd look at them, they were all like "what?" "we weren't doing nothing." Sure you weren't. Sure. I hate that now I have to write all these essays on how wonderful of an experience that outdoor Ed was. Oh, survival class...whoopie. Longhouse. Fun. Not. I will never, ever do anything like that ever again. Ever. In my opinion, the worst part is that I have to write a million essays on how great it was. I HATE lying, but all of my essays are lies, lies, and more lies. I know that everyone has had an experience like mine, so comment and tell me about it. Thanks!

Book exert

Running. I have to run. Can't reval my wings. I can only run. I see Kate, Jenny, Newt, and Rob next to me, looking for advise. I only shake my head. Don't. Reveal. Anything. To. Them. They all nod. Sorry, I'm getting a bit ahead of myself. My name is Lilly. I'm about sixteen, although I can't be sure. Here's what I do know. There were solar flares. Most people died. The ones that lived were mutated. We are five of them. I got wings. Kate got extra muscles. Jenny got super speed but I gave her wings. Long story. Rob can morph into things. Newt can hear thoughts and heal himself. All of us have improved scenses. Now something is attacking our planet, probably trying to take it over. My small group's only goal is to survive. Kate is thirteen, Rob is fifteen, Jenny is twelve, and Newt is ten.

My book exert

This is an exert from my book that I'm writing. Please give honest feedback. If its getting published, I want it to be good. "Running. I have to run. Can't reveal my wings. Can't use my super-scenes. I can only run. Next to me are Kate, Newt, Jenny, and Rob, looking to me for advise. I only shake my head. Don't. Reveal. Anything. To. Them. They all nod. Sorry, I'm getting a bit ahead of myself. My name is Lilly. I'm about sixteen. The date today is a mystery to me. Here's what I do know. There were solar flares. Most people died. The ones that survived were mutated. We are five of them. I got wings. Kate got extra muscles. Jenny got super-speed but I gave her wings. Long story. Rob is a shape-shifter. Newt can hear thoughts and heal himself. All of us have better scenes

I hate bullies. I have to deal with them every day. Reggie in pe, Reggie in science, London in science, Reid in science, Reid in pe, my whole class in pe, and everyone everywhere!