This is an exert from my book that I'm writing. Please give honest feedback. If its getting published, I want it to be good. "Running. I have to run. Can't reveal my wings. Can't use my super-scenes. I can only run. Next to me are Kate, Newt, Jenny, and Rob, looking to me for advise. I only shake my head. Don't. Reveal. Anything. To. Them. They all nod. Sorry, I'm getting a bit ahead of myself. My name is Lilly. I'm about sixteen. The date today is a mystery to me. Here's what I do know. There were solar flares. Most people died. The ones that survived were mutated. We are five of them. I got wings. Kate got extra muscles. Jenny got super-speed but I gave her wings. Long story. Rob is a shape-shifter. Newt can hear thoughts and heal himself. All of us have better scenes